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A lot of things have yet to fade
The scars on my arms, the marker dots on my palms
A lot of things, I'm glad didn't stay
The loathing of myself, of everyone else

A lot of things will go away
Old teachers, old glasses, things that have decayed
A lot of things, I wish they would have stayed
The love in my life, the tears that dried up
The inspiration that flew away

There are things that, I still regret
Things I even hide from myself
I've forgiven, all of my sins
And I've learned by now to just forgive everybody else
There are things that, remain hidden
Things that I don't want anyone to see
I've forgotten, why it's traumatic
And the only one that really cares is me,
Is me.

A lot of things have been kept the same
The memories, the faces, even though the hair is longer now
A lot of things still do remain
The people I have cherished and that have broken me

A lot of things have aged through time
The feelings, the thoughts of futures, even the dogmatic
A lot of things have warped through time
The pain that is real, the pain that I feel
The fears that I hide behind

There are things that, I still regret
Things I even hide from myself
I've forgiven, all of my sins
And I've learned by now to just forgive everybody else
There are things that, remain hidden
Things that I don't want anyone to see
I've forgotten, why it's traumatic
And the only one that really cares is me,
Is me.

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The only one that really cares is, me
The only one who keeps track of all these things.
Because I'm not too happy with a lot of my newest deviations currently, so I'll write something randomly that i will ultimately not be too happy in either.

Wait, nope. I actually like this one! o7o It is very fun to sing, and I think the words actually fit inside of me. I hope you like it too, even if it is just the lyrics.
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Cosmic--Chaos Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I can relate to this. I tend to dwell on these things often- I'm still unsure if that's good or bad...

The poem itself sounds like someone talking alone, thinking aloud and listening to how these words sound to their own ears.
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redleaveshavefallen Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
It's nice to hear your insight and interpretation. Thank you for sharing with me. It means a lot to know someone is thinking about what I write. =w=
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Cosmic--Chaos Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
You're welcome; it's an excellent poem.
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Kumoko-Tei Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2012  Student General Artist
Great! I agree with ~slowslicksnails, this flows well.
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redleaveshavefallen Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
=7= Thank you
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ssensory Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2012  Student Writer
Interesting :) this flows well
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redleaveshavefallen Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
thank you =7=
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ssensory Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2012  Student Writer
You're welcome
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JasonTheStranger Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2012
We're not watching Phi Brain because of you...
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redleaveshavefallen Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
we should be watching it now.
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